Cynthia Morris

Writing a book is messy, even for seasoned authors. Wrangling your material into cohesive shape is real work. There will be times when you sag with despair and cry out “This is a mess!” Rest assured. This is normal. This is not a function of your ineptitude, the lameness of your book or your inability to pull it all together. It’s part of the process of writing a book. Take a deep breath and trust yourself. Let’s look at how to sort this mess out. Be patient; it might take some time.

Depending on where you are with the process, it might be helpful to print the book up. Many of us are writing in one long on-screen document. Scrolling can be a nightmare, and rolling back and forth can contribute to your feeling of chaos. If you have a draft, even a shaggy draft, print the whole thing. Make sure that the pages are 1.5- or double-spaced, with page numbers at the bottom. Reviewing a printed copy makes it so much easier to see the whole. When I went through my printed draft, it was clear that the table of contents needed to be reordered.

With your printed manuscript in hand, step away from the computer. Take your notebook and pen with you. Your plan is to make a “punch list” of things to work on next. This is a term borrowed from the construction industry, where there’s a walk-through of a house before it’s finished or before a sale. The punch list includes things to fix or work on. Make a punch list for your book. You want one list that you can work through methodically later.

Now, back to the messy draft. Read through everything you have written. This read-through is for the purpose of seeing the whole, for distinguishing what’s working and what’s missing. Read like a teacher who wants to help the student make this paper as good as possible. Put check marks, smiley faces or stars next to things that are working. Add to your punch list as needed. Avoid getting caught up in wordsmithing: if you see sentences that you want to revise, underline them or circle words you want to change, but don’t get caught in the details now. Include the bigger things to work on, not the details. These could include:

• Revise chapter two.
• Add examples for chapter ten.
• Research for chapter four.
• Brainstorm ideas for images in the book.
• Identify passages that need to be fleshed out.

Your punch list will likely be long. Don’t despair. It’s good to have an objective list of things you can work on. The draft will still be messy, but now you have marching orders of what to improve. This kind of list serves as a project manager.

Once you’ve made the list, you can organize items into categories. My recent punch list includes:

• to write
• to do
• weave throughout
• to consider
• plan of action

For each writing session, go to the list and do some of the tasks. Check them off the list to feel a sense of progress. Address as many items on your punch list as you can in each sitting, but know your limits. Notice when you feel “done” writing—you might be getting impatient, rushing and lowering your standards to make progress. The list can also keep you from feeling ambushed by emotions that may arise when you sit down to write. You are just working your way through the list. You might go through this process many times, at least once for each draft. It’s okay—it helps you to know what to do and when.

Excerpted from The Busy Woman’s Guide to Writing a World-Changing Book.

Here’s a punch list I made in Notion for my novel-in-progress. I have whited out the details to avoid spoilers.

Thirty years ago, a mile from where I type now in Denver, I began my writing life in earnest. I wanted so badly to write, but I had no idea how or what! In a class called Writing the Wild Woman, I learned how to free-write, scribbling alongside other women. Afterward, we howled. Because, wild women and all.

It’s hard for me to believe I’ve dedicated 30 years to writing. As a girl, I spent most of my free time reading. I wanted to be a writer. And so, with lots of ink and angst, I have fulfilled a childhood dream. Despite the baby-blue typewriter my parents gifted me, I didn’t have the courage to start writing until my mid-20s.

In my garage are boxes filled with hundreds of journals. I haven’t kept everything but have files full of poems, articles, and essays. All the unseen words speak to the invisible labor that is the writing life. What is visible are the words I managed to bravely put into the world. If we want to have an impact, we have to overcome our fears and insecurities.

I like to say that if you want to know yourself deeply, take up an art form or start a business. All your demons will rise up to meet you. By continuing to show up, you learn that you are more than a handful of insecurities and hopes. Writing is a most splendid way to meet yourself in ink and hopefully, come out loving yourself a bit more.

Writing has offered me a powerful path to personal growth and empowerment. This is what I want for my clients. Not that they become writers, but that by becoming writers they become a stronger version of themselves.

My version of success

My writing life does not resemble what I dreamed of in my Ohio bedroom. I have not been ‘discovered’ by a publisher. I am not a best-selling author and my novel has not been adapted to a film starring Amy Adams. Dang! But how often do our actual lives match up to our imagined lives? I didn’t get married until I was 50, and my husband doesn’t look anything like I’d imagined. And yet, he’s perfect for me. As is my writing life.

If I look back and tally the wins, I’m proud of my writing life. I’ve written and self-published eight books and am working away at my ninth, a novel. I’ve published countless articles, mostly about writing and the creative process, productivity, and a few about yoga. I’ve learned how to write sales copy, because as a solopreneur, being able to promote my services was vital to survival. I don’t earn a living from writing. I have earned over $100,000 from writing – a glorious $3,333 per year!

You may know that I’m into a lot of things. I’m a writer, artist, gardener, traveler. Through my business, it seems like I’ve done a million different things, from retreats to online classes to monthly writing challenges. People call this ‘all over the place.’ Maybe so. When I look over the landscape of my writing life, I see a map of my abundant curiosity and creativity.

Aside from any outcome, my biggest success is that I kept writing. Even as my creativity has led me all over, writing persists. I’ve savored a lot of little writing victories. I have learned so much about myself and the art of writing things people (hopefully) want to read. I have the freedom to write what I want. My days involve a lot of writing. From commenting on clients’ writing to writing my novel to writing this essay, I see my values threaded through all my words: honesty, integrity, purpose, creativity, love of language and humor. Showing up to write means showing up to be me. 

Thirty years in, I am astonished to discover that even though I wander freely among all the creative outlets I love, I have become a person of tenacity and commitment. I am willing to keep at it even when writing feels like an emotional tsunami. The rampant rejections and disappointments have fostered a healthy sense of humility in me.

We want to write because we have something to say, and we want to be heard. There’s no way to measure how my writing has impacted the world. I only know that by showing up despite all the fears and doubts*, I have cultivated a healthy sense of self-respect. Whatever the outcome, I have honored this life-long impulse to write. I plan to keep writing, and friends, I hope you do, too.

 

*Spell-correct changed that to donuts. If ONLY my writing were fueled by donuts!

It turns out 2023 was a banner year for my book coaching clients. I am thrilled to share their work and successes with you. May their example inspire you to get your own words into the world.

Three surprising things about writing any book

I’ve been helping writers get their words on the page since 1999. Believe it or not, I love it more than ever. I learned so much this year about writing and how to help writers.

You may know this already, but writing a book is a THING. Even if you’ve written a gazillion words, a book is its own animal. People are often blindsided by what’s involved, so here’s a heads-up.

• Writing a book is less about writing and more about organizing.
• You can build a wildly successful marketing plan based on your strengths and gifts even without a huge platform.
• The thing that makes writing easiest is the thing people resist with all their force. I have to really work it to get my clients to surrender resistance and identify their reader.

You might wonder, “What does Cynthia do with writers?” I help smart and soulful people:

• organize their ideas and pull their writing into a book
• write and organize a book proposal, a massive marketing undertaking
• develop ideas and articles in a coherent and powerful body of work on Substack and LinkedIn
• strategize promotional plans and tactics that honor the writer and their goals.

Celebrate my clients’ wins with me

Paula Preschelack published her book The Montessori Potential: How to Foster Independence, Respect, and Joy in Every Child with Chicago Review Press. We’ve been working on this for years, so this was a huge achievement. We worked on how she could get the word out. Paula is a public speaker so we focused her promotion efforts on speaking engagements and also LinkedIn posting. I wrote a case study about our work together here. 

Cindy Lusk published her book Align and Refine: The Journey of Yoga and Meditation. I met Cindy at the Yoga Workshop in Boulder decades ago and always believed in her teaching style and her commitment to yoga. I’m thrilled to see her book come out.

Margaret Frolich, an Associate Professor of Spanish, published her second book Sexual Diversity in Young Cuban Cinema. I don’t work with many academics, but I helped Peggy to find flow and ease even under intense deadlines and work as the chair of her department.

I coached Donna Erickson to write a winning book proposal. This rarely happens, but she immediately got a book deal with the University of Nebraska Press (Bison Books imprint) for Rooted at the Edge: Where the Old and New West Collide. The book reveals the tensions of ranching at the edge of western towns, depicting a threatened Montana landscape steeped in history, conflict, and beauty.

Paul Wyman finished a draft of his book on parts work. I look forward to editing it in January. I love working with coaches who have a body of work they want to bring to a larger audience.

Christine Ruch is the founder of Fresh Thymes. (My favorite Boulder restaurant!) Christine wanted to write about food and health as part of her major career shift. I helped her organize her ideas and write powerfully for her Substack newsletter The Fresh Life. 

Tina Bettison’s Substack Gathering Our Bones is a delightful, creative space for women who want more from their lives and creativity. Tina was a member of Write ON where we helped her bravely launch her newsletter.

April Allderdice is CEO of an organization working at the nexus of clean energy, job creation, environmental justice, and climate change. She’s smart and soulful, and it’s been a delight helping her craft her ideas into compelling articles on LinkedIn.

Nancie Turner finished a draft of her novel and hired an editor. As someone who did this recently, I know what a big leap it is to invest in professional feedback. Nancie also crossed something off her to-do list: she got temporary tattoos. Inspiring messages on her wrist helped her get to the finish line of her draft.

I acknowledge my clients who have devoted themselves to their writing and aren’t at the ‘put it into the world’ stage. We are deep in the process of learning what they want to write and how to say it. I salute Aevea, Bibiana, Carla, Chris, Christina, Emilah, Jesse, John, Laurie, Melissa, Talib, Zaretta, and Zindzi.

I applaud members of the Impulse Writing Club for showing up every Thursday to write together.

Commit to your writing in 2024

If you want to write and need support figuring out what and how and when to put your ideas into ink, I can help.

1:1 book coaching accelerates the writing process and is great for busy executives who need flexibility. I have three openings for 1:1  starting in January.

Write ON coaching group starts in early January. If you benefit from learning from others and are on a budget, this is a great way to get weekly support for a writing project.

Want a simple, affordable ‘writing membership’? Join us to write every Thursday at the Impulse Writing Club.

My business thrives on referrals. Who do you know who could use a book coach? Send them my way!